What is wrong with this scenario?
First Draft
I will admit I’ve read quite a few first drafts that were tight but haven’t come across any first draft that read complete in any which way you looked at it. Something always needed changing: characters needed more dimension, setting needed more presence, dialogue had to be spruced up and taglines removed, or more of the five senses had to be written in to bring the scene to the reader’s mind with more clarity and vividness.
Characters
Are your characters flat, lifeless, no personality to set them apart from your secondary characters? Not sure? Well, that’s why it’s a good idea to get your story critiqued by another pair of eyes other than your own. These critiquers will be able to pinpoint areas they feel, as readers, need more fleshing out. Remember that you can’t please all of the readers all the time but if you can offer a character that is three-dimensional from the start, then perhaps you will please most of your readers.
The one biggest flaw I find in some writers is the fact they do not accept any comments where their work is concerned. Writers are always learning, always open to suggestions in order to guide and help them enhance their talent. The more they understand the areas they are weak in, the quicker these flaws disappear.
Publishers
Publishers know who their readers are. This is an area a writer also needs to understand. When you research a publisher, make sure to take the time and read one or two of their books to see if your genre fits in with their ‘style’. If you wrote a young adult novel, and you Googled ‘Children’s Publishers’, don’t send your manuscript to them UNLESS you check their guidelines. There you will see if they accept young adult manuscripts, their preferred word count, and other information needed in order to process your submission.
Do not be one of the writers who eagerly wait for months for a response only to discover the rejection letter states, “We are sorry but at this time we are not accepting any Young Adult manuscripts.” Waste of time.
Be smart, after all, you worked long and hard on your book, it deserves a chance to reach the right publisher.
Thanks. All good advice that I'll keep trying to heed.
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Nancy
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That is smart planning. (It should be common sense!)
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Hi Lea:
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Best wishes,
Donna
Nice post! It's helpful and informative. I must admit that I am guilty sometimes of looking at my work as if it's perfect. It's always a must to work hard and to write good to avoid rejection. I'm currently into writing research papers and spending a lot of time on research and the actual writing itself gives me a headache which results to not being able to fully check and proofread my work. What I've been trying to do now is that I study different coursework strategies and tips to help me improve my writing. Hopefully, I will never be rejected.
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